First Draft
After the class watched our first draft, some feed back we got was
during the panning we needed to point out who Jessie was speaking about
clearer. In order to make it better we used pink arrows with a
transition on it so it slides up the characters and points the the
person being directed.
Another thing that was pointed out was that the music in the background was louder than the voice over, to overcome this we turned down the and turned up with voice over.
We also needed to add in music in the opening scene and once we did it sounded better had have a better atmosphere to it.
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